What do you think of my poem?

Very unusual sonnet. Beautifully written, the rhyme scheme not the usual Shakespearean or Miltonic! Some lovely lines and I like the Greek Mythology connection. My favourite line is, 'At the banks of the River Styx our marriage bed shall be'. Well, composed, you have a talent for the sonnet, which is also one of my favourite forms. The best poem I've read for a while on this site. Excellent.