Thursday, August 11, 2011
Lyrics to my song No Answers?
Wow, this one, too, is a pretty great song. The only problem I have with the song is the metaphor at the end. I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to say. I mean, murder and God's will don't fit together. God wants peace in the world, and murder, needless to say, isn't very peaceful. Plus, who's two clowns are they? Are you saying that they're the government's clowns, or the President's, or Congress's? I don't quite understand. If you gave some insight for the metaphor, it'd probably make some more sense. As it stands, 9 out of 10. Great lyrics, nice rhythm, very well put together overall. Just make sure people understand the metaphor, including me.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
No comments:
Post a Comment